And there is certainly no excuse that you are not a doctor, or in anyway connected to the medical profession. Everybody should be able to used medical and scientific terms.
Use this story as an example:
Death Mars KLmMarathon
http://thestar.com.my/news/story.asp?file=/2010/6/28/nation/6560017&sec=nation
Monday June 28, 2010
Death mars KL marathon

The event not only attracted marathon enthusiasts but also entire families who took part for fun.
However, the event was marred by the death of a runner, Lim Wei Yee, 25.
Dang Wangi OCPD Asst Comm Zulkarnain Abdul Rahman said Lim died on his way to the hospital and that his body had been sent to Kuala Lumpur Hospital for post-mortem.
He said the police had yet to receive any report alleging negligence on the part of the organisers over Lim’s demise, which had been classified as sudden death.
Earlier, software engineer Toh Yit Ming, 26, said he was running his final lap on the 10km run when he saw a participant, whom he only knew as “Lim”, sitting on the roadside in front of City Hall before collapsing.
“He was having a seizure. A few runners tried to put him in a recovery position,” he said in a telephone interview, adding that he had told Lim to relax and breathe deeply as he was short of breath and clenching his teeth.
Toh said he, a doctor taking part in the event, and another participant had taken turns to apply cardiopulmonary resuscitation (CPR) on Lim when his pulse stopped.
He claimed no medical services arrived until about 15 to 20 minutes later.
“I am disappointed that the ambulance came late when the Runners’ Guide had stated that response time for emergency medical services would be three minutes and that medical aid was available every 5km of the marathon stretch,” said Toh, adding that three City Hall officers standing nearby with their motorcycles had not bothered to help the group.
He said he had to tell a passer-by to inform the officers to call the ambulance.
Toh also alleged that when the ambulance arrived, it did not have an automated external defibrillator or a face mask with pump (to pump in more air into the lungs).
I have enlarged and coloured the "medical words". So you should be able to use the correct terminology for your essay to be effective.
Gunakan istilah perubatan dengan betul untul memastikan essei anda berkesan! Anda harus mengetuhuai istilah yang betul.
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